(Correspondence between editor friend and meself)
That's the name of my new Latino clothing line.
Hey stranger!
My excuse for writing you is editorial in nature. I'm writing up a proposal for someone and I need some style advice on numbers. I need, god mother-fucking-help me, to create a 'sales hook,' in a sentence or two, for my project.
So I went telegraphic.
One Man. Six Continents. 18 Countries. 25 Wineries. 365 Days of Crush*.
My question: is it appropriate to switch from the Latin to the Arabic vis a vis double digit numbers. Three-hundred and sixty five days of Crush just looks stupid...
So-- what's the professional's take on all this?
Cheers!
w.
*"Crush," just in case you don't know, is the general term for harvesting wine grapes and the first stages of turning them into wine.
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Haha!
If you were going by Chicago, you'd write out everything but 365 (the rule is spell out 0-100 and any very round number beyond that--e.g. 1,000; 400; 3,000,000; etc.). The way you have it now is AP Style. But, both styles make allowances for parallel structure. Frankly, I would do it the exact way you have it, because it would be too weird to say "1 Man."
I like your sales hook. :)
Tuesday, August 4, 2009
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